Collective Thoughts After Comments

My draft is still extremely rough, I believe I was asked in a comment if it was a brainstorm and thats how I mostly see it. My ideas were scattered around and hard to understand unless you were me. I needed to gather all the information I could speak of before I started arranging, deleting, and adding flare into it. I want to write the article in a form that even if you haven't seen The Dark Side of the Rainbow you could understand what I'm speaking about. I'd like to even influence readers who have never seen it to try out the sync. When I first started this project I wasn't sure where It would take me. Never thought I would stumble onto evidence that makes it seem as though The Dark Side of The Rainbow is a requiem for Judy Garland. I've decided to revolve around the requiem as a main theme and only incorporate the ideas of synchronicity and apophenia as possibilities. There are a ton of other movies by Pink Floyd that also supposedly synchronize but Wizard of Oz seems to be the best. I plan to make the target of this piece to be film and music fans. Someone made a comment of homophobia icons in the media? But I don't think it has anything to do with homophobia. I believe that Pink Floyd might have even been giving praise to J. Garland for what she did. To speak of Judy Garland and not mention that which was also a big part of her life would be a half assed project. OR perhaps that would have been homophobia to leave it out.